You might consider:
Mounting the tanks with their tops level with the gunwale - for a better look and to keep leaking propane out of the boat better.
Running the line for the propane entirely on deck, to avoid putting a shutoff solenoid at the tanks.
That, if the windows are closed, there is no fume problem, and if the windows are open, there is plenty of ventilation.
Getting a cap for the stove pipe. Hamilton Marine sells ss stovepipe in 3" but they don't have a cap. The traditional cap swivels to keep the smoke exiting away from the wind.
1975 32' Flybridge Sedan, twin Perkins 6-354 diesels, 1:1.53 velvetdrives, 16 X 19 props. Merritt Island, Florida